My Character

Novice Posts : 2 Age : 28 Join date : 2015-04-06

|BASICS|
Name: Snowletta Sumera
Age: 19
Birthplace: Within the walls of the Southern Water Nation
Current Residence: Undecided
Rank: Bender
Occupation: Takes care of her and her twin brother.
Element: Water

Pets: She and her brother care for a set of twin arctic leopards.

Weapons: Snow carries a katana and a dagger; her brother carries shurikens.

|OPTIONAL|
Birthday: March 23
Blood type: B+
Hobbies: Sings, sketches, cooks, crafting, hunting
Quirks: Even though she bends water, she at times can have a temper of a fire bender.
Family: Joseph (Jose) Sumera
Character Theme: Radioactive- pentatonix with Lindsey Stirling

|APPEARANCE|
Hair: Snow has ash blonde hair, where when wet it looks like a light brown. It has been kissed by the sun so it has the highlighted effect and it is so curly that it reaches to the small of her back and she would have to keep if in ponytail holders.
Eyes: She has large, icy blue eyes which are framed by beautiful dark eyelashes. Jose on the other hand has light jade green eyes, which are smaller than Snow's and don't have as much eyelash as Snow. Both have catlike eyes.
Height: Snow- 5' 4" Jose- 5' 6"
Clothes: Both wear grayish-brown, leather boots which are lined with caribou fur. They have cotton like pants, Jose's large and baggy, it being a black color while Snow's is baggy and slightly smaller than Jose's with her color being a light brown. Jose wears a cotton shirt, which is long sleeved underneath a fleece like vest. Snow wears a long sleeved cotton shirt, the sleeves covering her hands and long enough from her neck to the center of her thighs, looking like a mini dress. Both shirts different shades of blue and lined with caribou fur.
Skin: Both have soft skin, and a few "abnormalities" like car ears and tails.
Body Type: While Snow looks like a goddess of some sort, Jose looks like her body guard that looks to not have that much muscle, but is as strong as one can be for a well built man.

|CHARACTERISTICS|
Personality: Snow and Jose are two opposite ends of a spectrum. Snow has a hard time with new people and surroundings, while Jose is the one that naturally negotiates any terms or deals. If she wanted to, Snow could easily freeze the body in ice, while Jose (sad to say) does not have the bending abilities. Snow is more of a sarcastic and sadistic being while Jose is more of the one that would not do anything to be harmed. Snow is the daredevil while Jose just wants things in control and calm.

Personal Strengths: Snow is lethal with blades and a excellent hunter and cook; Jose is excellent with "public speaking" while both are great at manipulation
Personal Weaknesses: Snow can't stand arrogant and despicable people and Jose can't handle violence well.
Hamartia: Snow has a extremely hard time trusting others besides Jose and Jose can never stand physical or emotional pain.
Personal Hero: Both are undecided
Dreams and Ambitions: Jose's dreams is to be in or have a family while Snow's life goal is to learn most, if not all, of the elements.

Likes: Snow love hunting, sketching and singing; Jose loves to cook and craft

Dislikes: Snow hates arrogant, treacherous and despicable personalities; Jose hates pain and chaos.

Brief History: Snow and Jose are twins that were born 10 minutes apart. Their biological father wanted nothing to do with Snow all because the father wanted a male heir to his line of wealth. Which then he left without a tracing, leaving only their mother, them and two servants: a butler and a maid.
Snow sadly witnessed the rape and murder of her mother while she was 12 years old, which then both Jose and Snow ran, not wanting to see what happened to orphaned children. They then set out their way to try and survive as best as they can.

Subject: Re: My Character Tue Apr 07, 2015 1:55 am

Snow,

Here's a few pointers:

One you already know about- look into maybe getting a photo up. Photos are good. Smile

Secondly - The profile jumps from one twin to the other. If you are trying to create twins, then create twins (in which case you should have 5 times of dislikes, likes, strengths, weaknesses for both of them). If you only want to use Snow as a character, than Jose needs to be created as a NPC (Non-Playable Character). I'd also like to see a bit more in the History section, even Twins will have a bit different histories. They experience things in different ways and detail is always good.

Other than that, Snow looks like a good character. Smile

Bailey

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