Jettori X ( Dark Bender) FIXED

Basics

Name: Jettori X
Age: 14
Birthplace: Dark Bender State of the Vermilion Dragon Empire
Current Residence: Dark Bender State of the Vermilion Dragon Empire
Rank: Bender
Occupation: None
Element: Dark Bender
Pet: None
Weapons : Two Shadow claws

Optional
Birthday: Sept 29

Appearance

Hair: Black spiky hair like Dan Kuso's hairstyle in Bakugan Battle Brawlers
Height: 5'6
Skin: nice fare skin
Eyes: Black
Body type: slightly muscular and above average speed
Mostly wears Black sleek clothing

Characteristics:

Personality:He is shy and doesn't talk much. Jettori is a nice person who loves to be alone. Jettori hardly fights and only fights if his life or home is threatened. He loves dark bending. Jettori is very cunning and stealthy. Jettori is very protective of his private life and belongings. When he opens up Jettori can be very sweet. In his alone time Jettori likes to dance but if you ask him about it he will deny it.

Weakness: He is weak to light benders and is very pathetic at talking to other people.

Likes: shadows, fire, candy, music and Dragons.

Dislikes: The sun, Light Benders, rude people, bugs, and mirrors.

History: Jettori was left as a baby by his parents in the Dark Bender State of the Vermilion Dragon Empire. As the parents left the baby was alone for hours crying. Then a Dark Bender found and saw the baby had great promise. The Dark Bender raised Jettori as his own alone. As Jettori grew older he started to aspire to meet other humans and make friends surpassing his shyness.
Now that he is 14 Jettori decides to run away from the Dark Bender State of the Vermilion Dragon Empire and get used to being around humans. The Dark Bender is emotionally attached to Jettori decides to follow Jettori instructing him on what to do in tough situations. The Dark Bender is Jettori's mentor and hates light benders. That is why Jettori also dislikes light benders because they killed his mentor's dad. The Mentor's name is unknown.

Well where to start. OK well first Dark Benders can not talk to spirits. Shadows Lands are for the Spirit King only. His personality must be a Paragraph and his history is fine. You need 5 likes and Dislikes.


Besides that, everything else is ok.

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